Monday, March 28, 2011

black beauty -1-

i read a new book this week, it's name is black beauty, i think it's really a good book.
this book told us a story about a horse's life. at the beginning, the horse introduce himself, he is a black horse, and he lived with his mother and other many horses, his father and grandfather both are were very famous horse and they won many important races. one day, he and his friends saw some people were hunting, they ride horses and run after a rabbit. they run very fast and the horses jumped, the dogs cried like yo-yo-yo-yo, the hare run towards the trees, so the horses and dogs run jumped over the stream and ran across the field, then black beauty heard a terrible scream, and the hare was caught, every hunter looked happy. but suddenly the black found a man fall down on the grass, but he looks unhurt. black beauty's mother told him that the rider's nick was broken and he's died and the horse that he rode broken his leg. his mother was very sad because her knew the horse for a long time, and he is a very good horse and since then she never went near that end of the field again.

1 comment:

  1. Good blog post for starters, but remember to write from the perspective of the main character. In this case, you will write from the first-person perspective of Black Beauty. You are the horse, retelling the story as it happened from your perspective. Please add in what you think the horse might be thinking, planning, or feeling in those moments too. It helps us to understand the psychology of the character.

    -Glen

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